Last but not least!

Finally, the last text I want to review is a poem written in 1801 by William Wordsworth called To A Butterfly. First of all, many would consider Wordsworth’s work to be wonderful and vibrant. I personally think he’s a little wish-washy and I generally don’t enjoy reading his work. That being said, my opinion is only influenced by the cultural context that I am living in. In the 1800s, the sort of language that he uses in his work was commonplace and widely respected, so I can overlook that aspect of it quite easily.

The poem is quite short, a seemingly simple ode to a butterfly as it visits his garden. Wordsworth observes the butterfly as it rests on a flower and he ponders it’s existence. He offers his garden as a sanctuary for when the butterfly is weary, a guardian if in need.

Wordsworth was never one to write about such simple things though. If we look past face value and investigate some possible deeper meanings of the text, we can see that the poem may not be to a butterfly after all.

First of all, what is a butterfly? On a denotative level, it is just a flying insect with colourful markings on it’s wings. What do Butterflies signify though? A beautiful, elegant being floating with the wind. It connotes a peaceful existence, something delicate and something to behold. Surely most of these things could also be found in a pretty girl.

So with this semiotic analysis, we could assume that the Butterfly represents a love interest. Wordsworth offers his abode as a place of sanctuary to her, watching her as she peacefully sleeps. By happenstance, she finds herself with him as the winds of fate carry her. They share the plot of Orchard together as he offers his undying devotion to her, promising no wrong. He offers opportunity of happiness if she will take his hand, talking of bright summer days and elated relaxation. The poem could be a declaration of love and longing.

This is most probably the case as William Wordsworth was and still is regarded as a very popular Romanticist. Wordsworth uses an element of personification to give the butterfly character, a wandering, spontaneous soul ready to be swept away by a charming gentleman such as himself.

Another interpretation could be the loss of his childhood. Upon seeing the butterfly, Wordsworth reminisces about his life, realising the fragility that it has. The butterfly represents the final stage in life. There is the inherent metamorphosis of starting life as a caterpillar, cocooning in a self-reflective phase and emerging as a complete being in beautiful brilliance. Perhaps Wordsworth reflects on his childhood, time squandered or missed and wishing he could take it back. This is especially prevalent in the last stanza, specifically referring to his childhood and joyous times gone by. This is very much up to interpretation because the butterfly is silenced. The narration from the poet’s point of view leaves a gap that must be filled by the reader.

Another thing I considered was when the poem was written. Wordsworth published this poem towards the end of his career, which solidifies my theory that he knows time is fleeting. He no longer has his whole life ahead of him and the wants the butterfly (representing his childhood) to stay.

Overall I think the poem was an excellent stimulate for self-reflection. Whether the poem was about a love interest or the natural progression of life, it is up to the individual to decide. Personally I prefer the love interest theory as it fits within his character of writing in the Romantic genre.

It is still interesting to note how the same poem can be interpreted in different ways and thus hold completely different meanings, as I have pointed out. That’s the fantastic thing about poetry; there is no right or wrong answer, everything is up to interpretation. It just depends on how far down you want to dig.

Bibliography

Finally, just a quick Bibliography of the texts that i referred to for literary techniques and the texts themselves! Moon and Berger were great sources for the different analysis elements. They helped refresh my memory from high school English classes and reminded me of some elements that i missed when i was first reviewing the texts. It was hard to try and cover all the techniques over the three reviews due to the low word count for each text, so i tried to balance them out over all three instead.

 

Berger, Arthur Asa. (2005). Chapter 1: Semiotic Analysis in Berger, Arthur Asa, Media analysis techniques, Thousand Oaks: SAGE, pp.3-37.

Mellor, Bronwyn et al. (2000). Chapter 2 : Reading Positions and Readings in Mellor, Bronwyn et al, Reading fictions : applying literary theory to short stories, Urbana: National Council of Teachers of English, pp.17-38.

Moon, Brian. (1990). Chapter 1: What is Literature? in Moon, Brian, Studying literature : theory and practice for senior students, Scarborough, WA: Chalkface Press, pp.5-23.

Weller, A. (1990). Stolen Car in Davis, J. Muecke, S. Narogin, M. Shoemaker, Paperbark: A collection of black australian writings, St. Lucia, Qld.: Uni of Qld Press, pp.128-140.

Stolen Car!

Hey all,

Continueing on from my last blog post, the next text I will review is not a poem, but a short story. Stolen Car was written by Archie Weller in 1978 for a magazine short story contest for Aboriginal and Indigenous writers. The story covers a wide range of political issues and reads almost as an anecdote about the social and cultural unrest of the Aboriginal community. Stolen Car is not so much a story of the car, but rather the relationship between the white community (namely the police officers) and the Aboriginal community.

The story starts with Johnny, an innocent Aboriginal country boy from the bush, starting off on an unknown journey into Perth. The boy, from a humble upbringing, is slowly introduced to the evil nature of society and grows to learn of the unfair treatment of his people by the generally perceived “superior white” people. The police bully and harass him as he finds himself incriminated as an accessory to multiple crimes. Slowly he is corrupted by his company, a gaol escapee (Wally), and so embarks on his downward spiral toward the same corruption he found in his companions.

After being thrown into gaol himself, Johnny emerges a different, darker person. Once free of hate, Johnny has become like all the others he met along his way. He despises the police, finds trust only in himself and careless for the world around him. Freedom comes when he commits his own crime of stealing a car.

The car itself is a metaphor for freedom.  He finds peace and solitude whilst driving the car towards the ocean, which connotes a free and relaxing place. He enjoys the power of the car, something he has never felt before. Having all individuality and independency stripped from him by the police, Johnny is, for once in his life, completely in control and is free to choose. The car empowers him, giddy with excitement. He pushes the car further, but once again his enjoyment is cut short with the police hot on his tail. Tragically he loses control of his newfound freedom and plunges into the sand dunes at 200km/h.

In the last paragraph, the author writes, “he couldn’t control the creature he had created”. Could this refer to the car, or perhaps Johnny himself? I would put my money on the latter. The word “creature” is an interesting choice. On a denotative level, it simply describes a living being. However it usually holds a connotation of something alien and unknown. Johnny had completely changed character into something he had never known before. Living in a derelict town, corrupted by his company and beaten down by society, he had become an alien in his own body. Just as he finds freedom within himself through this car, it, like everything else he has known, was taken away from him.

Stolen Car is written using slang and phonetics to help build character and representation of the Aboriginals in the story. It is important to note this literary technique, as it is very effective in establishing the different personas and it gives a good contrast to the well-spoken white characters in the story.

The reader is positioned by the author to feel empathy toward Johnny and the beaten and broken Aboriginals. This is no doubt intentional, with the author being aboriginal himself. Sadly, this could indeed be an accurate recount of a typical Aboriginal living at the time. The story sheds light on the Aboriginal’s side of the story. Possibly perceived as menaces to society by the white community, this story challenges that mind set and reveals that the Aboriginals were in fact the victims of society – not menaces at all.

So in conclusion, was this text classified as literature according to Moon? I would argue that it is. It contains many serious themes to ponder, uses special techniques of writing, offers a different perspective of the world and provokes consideration of sociological issues. Although written in an unconventional and simple way, Stolen Car is an excellent piece of literature. It addresses serious issues and made me personally consider my own prejudices and perceptions of society.

I’ve been reading.

Hello Internets!

Recently, I’ve started to read some more literature over the past couple of weeks. This goes against my usual habits of video games, music and socialising but I thought I would report here nonetheless. I want to talk about three texts that I read and give my reflections on them. First up is a poem by Pam Ayres, entitled Good-Bye Worn Out Morris 1000.

I chose to review this poem because the subject matter is something that I can relate to. The poem is about a person who loves their car. Unfortunately, it’s on its way out. Pam Ayres uses personification to give life to the car, evoking empathy within the reader.  A stronger connection is built with the person in the poem through the last line, “Why do your rusty headlamps look like sad, reproachful eyes?”

Despite all the things wrong with the car, the person still feels the sentimentality of their first car. This is something I can very much relate to. I bought my car first car last year and have done a fair bit of work to it. New rims, tyres, body kit, etc. Not only is that sentimentality there because it is my first car, it’s also there because I put so much effort into getting it looking like it does. To part with it would be like losing a friend, which would only get worse over time.

In the poem, the person feels much the same regret and sentimentality. This poem, regardless of whether you own a car or not, positions the reader to feel empathy towards the car at the end of its days. The poem is very easy to understand, as it doesn’t use complicated language or word choices. This would help to appeal to the modern day audiences, contrasting to the elaborate phrasing and sophisticated language of the 19th century literature, that most people get lost in.

At university, we’ve been discussing what literature really is. Can it be defined? Well, there are many ways to define literature. There is no one correct way; it greatly depends on your values, attitudes and beliefs. (Moon, 1990). I would definitely agree with this. The poem above is a pretty good example. If someone was to write Good-Bye Worn Out Morris 1000 back in the 1800s and was to ask the literary scholars, such as Wordsworth, if it was “literature”, the answer would most likely be a profound “no!”

The cultural context of the 1800s is very different to when the poem was written only a decade ago. Moon continues to explain that there are some distinct features that one can attribute to “literature”. Let’s have a look at what those features are, and if we can find any in Good-Bye Worn Out Morris 1000.

Features of a literary work

  • Contains finely crafted language.
  • Offers serious themes for consideration.
  • Is imaginative and creative.
  • Uses special techniques of writing.
  • Offers a perceptive view of the world.
  • Educates as it entertains.
  • Is generally agreed to have serious merit.
  • Doesn’t have a simple, practical function.

(Moon, 1990).

From scanning over this list, we can immediately see that there aren’t too many of these features that can be found in the poem. This is not to say that the poem does not qualify as being literature, though. A lot of these features are very subjective. Who decides what “finely crafted language” is? Again, this is culturally and socially specific. Of course, this is just one man’s interpretation as to what literature should include. There may be some features that have been omitted and some that have been included may not belong there at all.

By using this set of features, it can be established that Good-Bye Worn Out Morris 1000 is not literature by definition. The poem uses basic language, simple rhyme and metaphors and does not provoke deep thought within the reader. It is a light poem, which is part of its charm. It appeals to modern day audiences through a simple subject matter and colourfully expressed prose.

Stirring you up.

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